You are one sweet music,
The only one in which I am interested,
You are one fair chill breeze,
Your touch always puts me at ease.
You are that starry night,
In which shines that full moon bright,
Your warmth is soothing like that of the sun,
After I met you, my life took a new turn.
You are like the green leaf of that new plant,
Adorned by the dew on the morning grass,
You are like the sky full of clouds,
And the love you shower like rain on the ground.
You are like the flowers in the garden,
Or like the new bud just ready to blossom,
You are the reason for my laughter and my smile,
Be with me forever please, never leave me alone to live this life.
nice work aishwarya...but don't mind dis but rhyming is always not so necessary in poems...it shud only be put to work when it fits....like there is one poem of mine my prayers got answered, rhyming doesnt fit there so the poem is not dat gud....so make sure u use a nice rhyme with each word or u use no ryhme at all, nd making d poems rhyme is an old fashioned thing they say, so let me d only one who is anachronistic u try not to be.....
ReplyDeleteWell Sparkloner, I understand that rhyming is not necessary, And earlier, my very first poems have been in Blank-verse. Most of them. And don't worry, am not trying to be like you or rather 'anachronistic' like you. It's just that rhyming makes poems beautiful and alluring. Still I'll keep your words in my mind the next time I write.
ReplyDeletewell i was not saying that you are trying to be me, i was saying that try not to be to deep into the rhyme scheme, anyways sorry if you thought it meant something else....
ReplyDeleteagain, i completely agree that rhymes make the poem alluring....
sorry for anything that hurt you....
sparkloner