Wednesday, January 7, 2009

She Lost




Once upon a time
A girl sang songs
She used to shine
She continued to sing them
As long as she could
As beautifully as she should
She received standing ovations
She was the heart of every party
She was the soul of every evening so bright
She was the winner of every right competition
People gave her felicitations
But she didn’t know why
She fell in love with a guy
A bright jovial boy
For whom she could even die
He was unaware of this
They both thought their lives to be bliss
He sang songs too
But she also sang
So well, he never knew
Once he heard her singing
He went numb at her voice
To find that she was so good
He thought she was better than him
He praised her as much as he could
As long as he could
He started to underestimate himself
And told the girl she was a better self
She shed a million tears when
He said she was better
She thought what she could do
To change his mind
But he was damn determined
And his qualities, he undermined
She felt some weight too heavy upon her
Her thoughts, every moment, she stirred
Once came a time she thought she could
Made her love believe he’s good
And finally came the time
When fate was in her favor
The boy won
She was happy but in her efforts
To make the boy believe his self
She lost herself!

4 comments:

  1. Such a touching poem, aish... I adore the simplicity with which you've shaped the words into such a perfect poem. May God bless you!

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  2. beautiful....just simply beautiful

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  3. i loved it...
    so simple yet so deep in meaning...beautifully written... :)

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